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  • I wish text bubbles were like voice over artists in animations. It would be cool to have real girls writing the words :)



  • Personally I don't mind a story. However, I do dislike bad grammar. Perhaps it's just me, but if you're going to add text in any language it should be grammatically correct. I've more than a few Japanese works were I'd rather they had just left it in Japanese rather than go for the Engrish.

    TL;DR, text and no text are both fine, however, if you do text take your time and do it well.



  • @'hibbli':

    most people like a storyline, i often get this as a feedback.
    my first (test)comic with storyline here at the shop reached a really good amount of sales which i never expected : )

    Stories add context and flavor that wouldn't be there with just the art alone, and can intensify the experience, which is why people like it. (also why I've been pushing to get writers to post more often)

    I suppose a third alternative, one that hasn't been mentioned here, is something Dizzydills does (and hibbli sort of does as well): Write a text story, with the art added in as a form of illustration. It circumvents the text bubble problem by simply allowing the art to represent the story, rather than attempting to make the story a part of the art.



  • most people like a storyline, i often get this as a feedback.
    my first (test)comic with storyline here at the shop reached a really good amount of sales which i never expected : )



  • @'rstarr':

    I wasn't going to name names, but his work is what stands out in my mind as the most annoying text of all. The juxtaposition is absurd. Truly top drawer 3d art, and dialogue bubbles that look like they come from a 13 yr old. It's such a conflict it gives me a headache and I won't even glance at Zzomp with dialogue bubbles.

    Always though most of my dialogues are ridicolous … but it's too funny writing the "porn language" :D

    Sometimes I've tried to make my girls saying something different from "your cock is too big" , but it's really hard to find something interesting to say with a 15 inches cock pointing your face :angel:


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    depends on how good the story is :) … if it's a hack job better off without a story, if it's written well and there's a theme and thread behind it, then go for it, but note that it will take more effort also :) you may want to team up with a writer



  • @'Dionysos':

    Thanks for all your answers!
    English is indeed not may native language and this makes it difficult to write a (porn-)story which is not just ridiculous. (I've seen the error in my first post now… I guess it has been to late when I wrote it yesterday).

    As far as I can see now, the version without any text is simply a must.It did this already in my last products, but not when I started this stuff.

    Good stuff, and your English is exceptional for a second language. In my experiences, the pictures are enough to set my imagination on a steady, worthwhile course ;). Most of the bubbles I've seen are like "Shut up and do it," or "suck my cock," in which case they don't even need to be there. Since you're grabbing the other person and thrusting yourself at her face I kind of get the picture without the words.

    So if the words and story are present they must compliment the pictures, and somehow add to them, not just provide exposition for what we can already see is happening. Instead of "suck my cock," there's "come on, your sister likes it. Don't you, too?" You see what I'm saying.


    @'hzr':

    Yeah I would say the same as fred, as long as there is nothing important going on, noone really cares about any talk. Sometimes it even makes it just cheesy. Some naughthy things might be nice however. Take the stuff from Zzomp for example. This should give you a good idea of the stuff that actually helps to increase the naughtyness :)

    I wasn't going to name names, but his work is what stands out in my mind as the most annoying text of all. The juxtaposition is absurd. Truly top drawer 3d art, and dialogue bubbles that look like they come from a 13 yr old. It's such a conflict it gives me a headache and I won't even glance at Zzomp with dialogue bubbles.



  • Thanks for all your answers!
    English is indeed not may native language and this makes it difficult to write a (porn-)story which is not just ridiculous. (I've seen the error in my first post now… I guess it has been to late when I wrote it yesterday).

    As far as I can see now, the version without any text is simply a must.It did this already in my last products, but not when I started this stuff.

    Let's see if some more guys write something here...



  • @'rstarr':

    But if there are dialogue bubbles everywhere, misspelled words, poorly grammaticized English… I'm not googling you since I'll think all your work is covered with it. (And not to be rude in any way at all, but your first sentence of your post shows an example of what I mean, be super thorough on your proofread if you're doing text.)

    My guess is that English is not Dionysos' native language, so I'm willing to cut him some slack on that. He'll probably need to find somebody proficient with English to help him proof his material until he becomes more fluent.



  • I've never seen your stuff but I do enjoy reading stuff with speech bubbles that kinda tells a story.



  • If you do a text version, you must also do an artwork only version. You just must. You must see that it's just the way of things that your set will not remain a set, and individual pics will float out into space like dandelion seeds. And they need to be stand alone pieces of art, without parts of a story all over the piece. And if someone finds one of your pieces, hopefully it has your name in the corner, and they can google your name. But if there are dialogue bubbles everywhere, misspelled words, poorly grammaticized English… I'm not googling you since I'll think all your work is covered with it. (And not to be rude in any way at all, but your first sentence of your post shows an example of what I mean, be super thorough on your proofread if you're doing text.)

    I think it reduces an artpiece and makes it more of a dirty scribble on a bathroom wall kind of piece. I think everything I said above also goes for wet versions of identical pieces. If you want to do a cumshot, make a whole new image, tired of dry and wet versions - they're inherently unimpressive - since you know it's not worth the time to make a new image it's not even worth the time to make me look at two of the same thing.



  • @'gazukull':

    I include both in my products. Rather at least I started to with Dead Tide 2. Seems like a win win / appease those who want a storyline as well as the imagery only fappers.

    If the writing is good, then I am all for a story.

    -G

    Exactly, the problem is that a story and whether the viewer/end user likes it or not is just as subjective as whether someone likes the art, and the dislike of one can ruin the enjoyment of the other ;)

    But I like a good story as much as the next guy



  • I include both in my products. Rather at least I started to with Dead Tide 2. Seems like a win win / appease those who want a storyline as well as the imagery only fappers.

    If the writing is good, then I am all for a story.

    -G



  • I always read the story the first time. I mean, hell, I go through all off JAG27's (Otto Maddox) work and read the whole thing. :D



  • Yeah I would say the same as fred, as long as there is nothing important going on, noone really cares about any talk. Sometimes it even makes it just cheesy. Some naughthy things might be nice however. Take the stuff from Zzomp for example. This should give you a good idea of the stuff that actually helps to increase the naughtyness :)

    In the end though just go with your gut feeling. If you think its hot and it belongs there, then put it in. If one person likes it, you can be sure that there will be others who like it too.



  • I voted for pictures only, but ideally (and if you have a story you want to tell) offer both options as being downloadable, either in one package or seperate :)


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